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I love the colors you have working here and the concept itself is very enjoyable to me. The nose and lips are very soft, subtle and beautiful! There's also some stroke sin the hair that work excellently. The one thing that dose throw this a bit for me is her eyes and brow line almost seem flat to me. I would suggest bringing up the outside of the left eye. Also possible consider fleshing out her neck more toward the bottom. The slender aspect works, but it seems a bit pushed in my opinion. There's some very strong emotion to this piece though, I'm looking forward to see how your process goes with this one ^^ Digital painting is something else!